When Jackie Bach and I were considering applying to be editors for The Alan Review, the most inportant contribution I made was suggesting that we include Melanie.. We did and it was a great move.
Over the last twenty years I have learned to trust Melanie. Her work is fantastic and every time I work with her or read something she has done I learn something new.
Thanks Melanie.
Meet our Contributor: Melanie Hundley
| Dr. Melanie Hundley is a Professor in the Practice of English Education at Vanderbilt University’s Peabody College; her research examines how AI, digital and multimodal composition informs the development of pre-service teachers’ writing pedagogy. Additionally, she explores the use of AI, digital and social media in young adult literature. She teaches writing methods courses that focus on AI, digital and multimodal composition and young adult literature courses that explore diversity, culture, and storytelling in young adult texts. She teaches AI and literacy courses including AI and Storytelling. Her current research focus has three strands: AI in writing, AI in Teacher Education, and Verse Novels in Young Adult Literature She is currently the Coordinator of the Secondary Education English Education program in the Department of Teaching and Learning at Vanderbilt University’s Peabody College. |
The Story of My Anger, The Poetry of Car Mechanics, and Frankenstein by Melanie Hundley
The connection to Frankenstein lies in the shared exploration of alienation, identity, and the longing to be understood. In The Story of My Anger and The Poetry of Car Mechanics, the speakers use poetic language to express feelings of being misunderstood, judged, or defined by others. Similarly, the Creature in Frankenstein struggles with rejection and isolation, shaped by society’s fear and cruelty rather than his own intentions. All three works reveal how being labeled or rejected can fracture one’s sense of self, while also showing the human desire for connection, recognition, and dignity.
Frankenstein: A Modern Prometheus may seem to be a distant text for many of our students, these verse novels can help provide insight and connection. In Sit and Simmer (a poem from The Story of My Anger), Juli describes how her anger builds, how it develops, and how she tries to control it. Like the Creature, anger is something that builds and builds.
Sit and Simmer
This understanding of anger closely connects to Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein, particularly to the Creature’s experience of rejection and isolation. Like Lopez’s speaker, the Creature does not begin with rage; his anger develops as he is denied voice, recognition, and belonging. Together, these texts invite readers to consider anger not as an inherent flaw, but as a response to being unseen, unheard, and misunderstood.
Sit and Simmer
My name is Yulieta Lopez
and this is the story of my anger,
and how it became
a five-alarm fire I tried
to smother silent
but it spun into an asteroid
that slammed around inside me
and begged to be let out--
I didn’t want to play the part
of the angry Black girl
so I tried to keep the fire
constrained in my belly
but it slithered out and snaked
itself around my throat--
a rope of smoke
that caused friction
in the folds of my body
and the longer I let it sit and simmer
the harder it became to just breathe. (Mendez, 2025, p. 4)
- What emotions stand out to you when you read or hear “Sit and Simmer”?
- How does the title itself set the tone for the poem? What does it mean to “sit” with something? To “simmer”?
- What is happening in the poem literally — and what’s happening emotionally or symbolically?
- Identify one or two key images that describe anger. How does Mendez visualize or embody the feeling?
- How does her choice of verbs (for example, words like boil, simmer, stew, burn, swallow) shape how we experience anger in the poem?
- How does Mendez use cooking language as metaphor? What does that suggest about where anger comes from or how it’s contained?
- What does the speaker’s use of sound (repetition, rhythm, pauses) reveal about control or release?
- How does the speaker describe anger as something that lives inside the body rather than something expressed outwardly?
- How is this similar to the Creature’s experience with anger in Frankenstein?
- What causes the Creature’s anger?
- What happens when he is ignored, rejected, mistreated, or silenced?
- At what moments in the novel does the Creature’s anger “sit and simmer,” and when does it finally erupt?
The Poetry of Car Mechanic
The Poetry of Car Mechanics
There is a certain poetry
in car mechanics.
Part art,
part meter and math,
part discovery.
Lifting the hood reveals
a world I know--
not like the real world
with its
mixed messages
and verbal
land mines.
Missing pieces
and ones that don’t quite fit--
like me.
When I’m inside an engine,
everything makes sense.
The motor sings.
I can tune the sour notes,
fix the broken parts.
Less doctor
than partner.
I wish the world around me--
with its broken parts,
with my broken parts--
was more like a car engine. (p. 13)
- Choose one key character from the novel (Dr. Frankenstein, the Creature, etc.)
- Use the dependent authorship template below for your version of the poem
- Write in first person
- Your poem should include
- at least one metaphor or extended comparison
- sensory imagery(sound, touch, taste, sight, etc.)
- words and phrases that reflect/show the emotional state of the character
1. What does your character understand deeply? What do your character understand better than other people?
2. What does he/she use to bring order and control to their world?
3. Where does your character feel safe? Where does your character feel powerful?
4. What parts of the world confuse, threaten, or reject your character?
5. What does he/she feel comfortable or in control doing?
Use the structure, line movement, and craft of "The Poetry of Car Mechanics" as a model. Keep the poem’s skeleton (line breaks, comparisons, shifts), but replace the ideas with your own experience and subject.
Based on the poem The Poetry of Car Mechanics by Heidi E. Y. Stemple
There is a certain poetry
in ____________________.
Part ____________________,
part ____________________and ____________________,
part ____________________.
____________________ reveals
a world I know--
not like the real world
with its
and ____________________
____________________.
and ones that ____________________--
like ____________________.
When I’m inside ____________________,
everything makes sense.
The ____________________ ____________________.
I can ____________________,
____________________.
Less __________________
than __________________.
I wish the world around me--
with its _____________________,
with my ____________________--
was more like ____________________.
By ____________________

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